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Jim Cummings's avatar

A sigh of relief that Kelsey and the gang are finally out of harms way. Hoping that Kelsey receives the recognition he deserves. Also hoping for word that Junior is on the mend. Eager to read the wrap-up, KC. Great story!

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K.C. Knouse's avatar

Thanks for the kind words and support over these many months, Jim. Your encouragement is appreciated. Kelsey is tested one more time in the final chapter.

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Parker McCoy's avatar

Kelsey and crew really ruffled some higher-up feathers here. That's pretty awesome. Kelsey never gave up on his mission, and he's helped a lot of people. I can only imagine that Junior will think so highly of him after this. Wow, the final chapter is right around the corner. I'm looking forward to that. This has been a very fun journey, KC. Thank you so much for sharing.

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K.C. Knouse's avatar

Kelsey has proven himself. He stepped out of Junior's shadow to take charge of his life. Thank you for your enduring support, Parker. I appreciate your comments and restsacks over these many months.

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C. Lee McKenzie's avatar

It was interesting to "meet" the parents in this chapter. And I loved "Kelsey was in no hurry to deal with his parents." I understand that sentiment so very well.

Here's to wrapping it up and moving on. Congratulations.

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K.C. Knouse's avatar

I think the parents were in shock which was to Kelsey's benefit. Thank you for your encouragement and support, Lee. It means a lot to me.

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James Ron's avatar

Kelsey has grown into someone much removed from the youngster he was at the beginning of the story. And seemingly older now than his friends. Can't wait for "34."

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K.C. Knouse's avatar

Yes, Kelsey has matured a lot as a result of his adventures. He has another test of his resolve in the last chapter. Thank you for your support and encouragement over these many months, Ron. I have enjoyed receiving your take on each chapter.

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Mike's avatar

K.C. Again, an excellent yarn. It will be extremely interesting to see to what extent Kelsey tells his parents the full truth about his (mis) adventures.

I imagine he has a rather difficult conversation ahead with Arlene's parents as well.

I have an urge to tell Kelsey, "Good luck, buddy! Better you than me!"

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K.C. Knouse's avatar

Thank you, Mike, for reading and commenting. You have a unique take on Kelsey and the events in the story. I appreciate hearing from you. You will like the ending. Kelsey stays true to his character and his devotion to Junior.

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Sharron Bassano's avatar

Looking forward to seeing how this plays out, Ken. I am hoping Kelsey will be recognized as a "hero" of some kind, for all he has gone through!

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K.C. Knouse's avatar

You will not be disappointed, Cousin. Kelsey will continue to surprise as he strives to fulfill his mission to aid his best friend. Thank you for the solid support you have given me over these many months. It means a lot to me.

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Jim J Wilsky's avatar

K.C., this story has been a dandy, and I can't wait for the final to close it out properly - which I know it will. Looking forward to 34. Great job. - Jim

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K.C. Knouse's avatar

Thank you, Jim, for your confidence in my ability to deliver in the final chapter and for your unwavering support. This chapter was a bit dull, but I needed it to set up the ending.

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