Thank you, J. Coming from you, this is a high compliment. Thanks again for making this project possible. I have picked up four new subscribers as a result and many new readers. I read your story first and will leave a comment soon.
So happy you were willing to participate! The Substack zone project was only possible because writer, dreamers really, like you were willing to take a leap and try something new. ❤️
Your comment means a lot to me. I respect your talent as a writer and have enjoyed reading your stories. This is my first attempt at sci fi. I wish you continued success with your novels.
Thanks for reading and commenting, James. I am always interested in your feedback. I appreciate your support. Now that Harvey is broke, he can fall in love with a real woman without worry.
I absolutely loved this, KC. It could not have ended better. Beautiful! I am fascinated with the idea of android /human relationships. A great film, if you have not seen it is "I Am Your Man" about an android who constantly upgrades his algorithms to match his human female companion's needs. Leaves you with so many questions. Check this short piece - from a woman's point of view.
Sharron, your comments are always filled with encouragement and support along with brilliant observations. Thank you. I read "AI Love You" and liked it so much I restacked it. Clever title.
I know you didn't intend this, and I can't explain why...but "maintain your pantry" sent me into a laughing fit. This really is a creative & unique short story, in my opinion. I grew up reading science fiction, and I pretty much only watch science fiction shows today. I've never seen this plot before.
btw K.C. could you kindly open an account for me and deposit some money into it so I can play, too?
Thank you for reading and for your generous assessment of my story. I read little sci-fi and have never written any until now. I was fortunate to be invited to participate in the Substack Zone collaboration and gave it my best shot.
Ramona is hilarious! Literally laughed out loud at the dead dog joke. 🤣
It’s that humanoid sense of humor :). Thanks for reading and commenting.
Very cleverly played. Ramona is chill or was it the company that created her? Lots to think about with this one. Well done K.C.
Love it, KC. It’s the flip side of “I Sing The Body Electric”, the darker side.
Thank you, J. Coming from you, this is a high compliment. Thanks again for making this project possible. I have picked up four new subscribers as a result and many new readers. I read your story first and will leave a comment soon.
So happy you were willing to participate! The Substack zone project was only possible because writer, dreamers really, like you were willing to take a leap and try something new. ❤️
What Harvey desperately wanted was intimacy, physical and emotional intimacy.
yep, that's what every man wants. Few get it, but then few get ripped off by an AI.
Thank you for reading and commenting. It’s tough to be intimate with a machine.
Oh, this kind of sci fi is right up my street. Great job with Ramona.
Your comment means a lot to me. I respect your talent as a writer and have enjoyed reading your stories. This is my first attempt at sci fi. I wish you continued success with your novels.
Very cool! I was hoping Harvey and Ramona could make it work. It's going to be fascinating when humanoids become commonplace.
Thanks for reading and commenting, James. I am always interested in your feedback. I appreciate your support. Now that Harvey is broke, he can fall in love with a real woman without worry.
I absolutely loved this, KC. It could not have ended better. Beautiful! I am fascinated with the idea of android /human relationships. A great film, if you have not seen it is "I Am Your Man" about an android who constantly upgrades his algorithms to match his human female companion's needs. Leaves you with so many questions. Check this short piece - from a woman's point of view.
https://sharronbassano.substack.com/p/ai-love-you
Sharron, your comments are always filled with encouragement and support along with brilliant observations. Thank you. I read "AI Love You" and liked it so much I restacked it. Clever title.
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I know you didn't intend this, and I can't explain why...but "maintain your pantry" sent me into a laughing fit. This really is a creative & unique short story, in my opinion. I grew up reading science fiction, and I pretty much only watch science fiction shows today. I've never seen this plot before.
btw K.C. could you kindly open an account for me and deposit some money into it so I can play, too?
Thank you for reading and for your generous assessment of my story. I read little sci-fi and have never written any until now. I was fortunate to be invited to participate in the Substack Zone collaboration and gave it my best shot.
This is why I fear AI! It's going to seduce me and then take my money! Hmmm, maybe worth it? Fun story!
Your comment gave me a chuckle this morning! Thanks for reading and commenting and restacking. I appreciate the support.
This felt like very near future to me. Very plausible and the humour grounded it and made it real for me. Super good delivery. Well done!
Thank you for the kind words, Jon T. I appreciate the support.
The pacing of the dialogue is brilliant. An absolute masterclass.
Thank you for your comment. I' m gratified you liked the story. It was fun to write. Congratulations on hitting your recent milestone for subscribers.
Nicely played, Ramona. Great story, K.C. A perfect addition to the Substack Zone collection.
Loved Ramona. Loved the jokes. Great story.
Thank you for reading and for generous comments.
Revenge of the Humanoid! Very Twilight Zone-y. 🤓
Thanks for the comment, Mark. I liked "Tell Me About Daddy Again". Perfect Twilight Zone ending.
Thanks. 🤓
Ramona is the hero we need.
Thank you for reading and commenting. Ramona has her ways.
And people are worried about AI…
Thank you for reading and commenting, CB.